Me starting with the shayaris....

Sab kehte hain ishq mein logon ki neend ud jaati hai
khwaahish thi koi hum se bhi ishq kare..
humein neend bhaut aati hai
kuch toh poori kar di khuda tuney, mere khwaab le kar
ab ishq ka bhi aks dikhaa dein....koi sailaab de kar


Meri aankhon ke noor ko dikha aye khuda tu raasta ...
kab takk dhoondhengi andhere mein ussko ye rafta rafta..
zaalim duniya bhi toh deti hain itni thokrein...
fanaa kar dein sab ko, jo iss ishq se ho jaaye vaasta...
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  1. AuroraOctober 13, 2008 at 1:44 PM

    hey nice work kims :))

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  2. CalicoasterOctober 13, 2008 at 7:19 PM

    thanks Megha >:D<

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  3. GaryOctober 13, 2008 at 11:16 PM

    beautiful, as always :)

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  4. kirtanOctober 14, 2008 at 2:47 AM

    kuch toh poori kar di khuda tuney, mere khwaab le kar

    yeh line samajh nahi aayee....

    by the way u sound a bit of desperate :P

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  5. CalicoasterOctober 14, 2008 at 7:41 AM

    lol..shayaris sab despo hee hoti hain....if you notice that!!

    =))

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  6. SUDHANSHUOctober 14, 2008 at 9:57 AM

    hmm.. good work ..

    para 1 mein "pyar bina chain kahan re"
    para 2 mein " pyar ke side effects"?

    cool

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  7. CalicoasterOctober 14, 2008 at 4:11 PM

    heheheheheh

    @sud

    Nice comments....!! :P

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  8. AnonymousOctober 15, 2008 at 4:29 AM

    likhne ka shauk bachpan se hai ya, you hi dil se awaz nikli to kalam kar diya karte ho?

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  9. CalicoasterOctober 15, 2008 at 5:10 PM

    @Anonymous

    Both..... :)

    but may i know who you are?

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  10. AnonymousNovember 10, 2008 at 2:27 AM

    Jhooth kehte hain sabhi log, jo ye kehte hain..
    Ki ishq mein unki neend ud jaati hai..
    Ishq mein jo sukoon hai, woh to khuda ko paane mein bhi nahi..
    Ishq mein padke hi to logon ko neend aati hai....

    Hum nahi jaante ki aapke ishq ka paimana kya hai..
    par itna maante hain ki ishq nahi hua hai aapko..
    zaalim duniya ki thokron ko yun na kosiye, zaalim..
    yeh thokrein hi ishq ki raah par chalna sikhaati hain....

    Maangti hain aap khuda se ek sailaab..
    Ek sailaab jo dikhaade aapko ishq ka aks..
    Aapki is hasrat par, is gustaakh ko, hanseen aati hai..
    Arre khuda kya dikhaaega aapko sailaab-e-ishq...

    Itna bhi nahi jaanti ??

    Khuda hi ishq ka aks hai, Ishq hi khuda ka aks hai..... :-)

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  11. MayankNovember 10, 2008 at 7:55 PM

    Hey I guess I shouldn't have been anonymous with my post above.

    I just happened to stumble across your blog last night.
    I appreciate the creativity in your writing and was intrigued by your shayari. So much so, that I decided to respond with a shayari of my own...

    I hope you didn't mind that... :-)

    Cheers !!!
    Mayank

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  12. CalicoasterNovember 11, 2008 at 10:00 AM

    That was brilliant Mayank...Thanks!! :D

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  13. MayankNovember 11, 2008 at 7:02 PM

    Thanks Kimi...

    By the way, I noticed that your blog is named Kabbalah..... and your username is magnamater... :-)

    You really are a "cult" fan, aren't you ?? ..... :-)

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